Very sad and very nicely written.

Aw, this is great, I swear I always want to start bawling when I think about that episode! I just love how Jal tries to be optimistic at the end, but you can tell she doesn't really believe it.

Really well written.

O this is good. Very good.

I love your method of expression.

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I might add it to my C2, Skins Life, which has an ajoining forum where you can chat to people and people can chat about your stories.