this is good... really good! you write initmate scenes really well. i feel thoroughly contended and at peace after reading this

Awesome. I shall be looking out for more from you. I hope you don't disappoint!

This is excellent - Very much in character, and well-written to boot! I hope to see more stories from you in the future.

this was a realyl good story. bravo ;)

A wonderful follow-up to the first chapter!

You really succeed in describing their exhaustion and the rain, it comes across so vividly.

Booth arresting her father, a tricky issue, but you deal with it so well, it feels realistic.

“Well, if you can defy the space-time continuum, go back to one hour ago and try not shooting Langdon,” Brennan hissed, the words leaving her lips before she even had a chance to think about it. - I like how you have Brennan say this, we know Booth shooting people is a sensitive issue but it's in line with Brennan's character to say things like this sometimes.

I hope you'll write more.

I loved this. I have a real thing for all the drama surrounding Brennan's family and Booth's part in Max's arrest. Thanks for sharing :)

Wonderful! Absolutely wonderful! I really enjoyed it! Great story! I really enjoyed the ending! Perfect!

Wow! What an intense chapter! I really enjoyed reading it!

Love the last line of the story, so perfect. It's a realistic scenario too, so good for you.

Cool chapter.

So glad I found this story!

Often you know from just reading the first paragraph if something is good or not. This did not disappoint but fulfilled everything the first paragraph promised, well written and in character. It also has an interesting plot, we have not found out much about Max Keenan's case (maybe because of the strike cutting the season short?) but I think your idea works. If you have an idea, try it out, that's what ff is for :)

I like everything down to the details. How Brennan putting together the skull can be seen as her trying to relax by laying a puzzle 'the anxiety of waiting was slowly overwhelming and stifling her.' The poker chip is another favorite. You've captured them perfectly waiting in the car.

And what a dramatic end to the first part, looking forward to finding out what happens!

Very well written! It was captivating! I would love to read more...so post more soon! Its going right to my alerts list.

Nice start. cant wait to see where this goes.

Brilliantly plotted and written. Also: awesome first fic. Looking forward to more!

this is incredibly good. Im eagerly awaiting part 2!