Well the story was awesome and all... but I disapprove of u being so cryptic about who died... I mean I only knew it was Ron from the reviews and the word alone at the end. I hate u for killing him by the way...

Alright...didn't see that one coming. Wonderfully done. My eyes were tearing up by the end ;)

Short, but emotionally powerful.

This drove me to tears. Well done. :)

This story is pure gold. The emotions are beautifully poetic and your words flow like silk. You had me wondering the whole time why she was so upset, I was thinking it was George's funeral (you sneaky writer, you), and Hugo and Rose were already born...so it made me wonder why she would say, "I don't want to do this today," when it had been such a long time since he had really died...

I'm babbling now, but I really just wanted to say that I really enjoyed this story and I look forward to reading your other stories! *runs off to read more*

I was still trying to figure out who had died (and I've even thought it could be Hugo, which would have been cruel) when I've finally realized that it was Ron. And that made me cry! To think that she was seeing him there, comforting her before his own funeral... it's so beautiful, and so sad!

You're an amazing writer!

Wow... that was beautifully heart-breaking. I like how subtle this was, it slowly unravels itself until you realise it's Ron's funeral, but before that every other possible dead character comes to your head.

Nice work. Thanks for a great read!

*cries*

Why, WHY? Oh, the humanity!

But seriously, this was beautiful. Your detailed descriptions, your prose and misdirection...it was all absolutely, wonderfully beautiful. I quite enjoyed reading it.

~dieselwriter

that was so beautiful TT

Nice misdirection, I was expecting a dead Hugo and ended up with a dead Ron. Should have seen that one coming considering the source!

Here's what worries me though. You take a break from torturing Ron in "Surviving" to bury him in this story. I'd hate to see what you'd do to characters you DON'T like.

*loves your angst*