OMFG I FINALLY FOUND IT YES AHAHAHAHAHA! You don't know how long I've been looking for this! I saw it once a few years back and I recently just remembered it and I couldn't find it anywhere! GAAAAAHHHHH

I always go back and re-read this. I don't normally do that. Once I've finished a story that's it, but this I always sing along to. I imagine the scenes going by through Iroh's eyes. You hit this spot on. I wish a recording of this add-on was actually part available.

love this version of this song

This touched my heart in such a way I started to have tears weld in my eyes. And what made it harder was I could hear Iroh, and he began to cry.

You sir/ma'am have written something so beautiful...so touching...I hope they make this a memorial day anthem.

Bravo! T_T

That ... That was amazing! Thank's for makeing this!

Fuck, this saddens me more than the original. This should be a full song.

OMG! THAT WAS SOOOOOO SAAAAAD! I wanna cryyyyyyyy! But great job! The words fit perfectly.

I'm too sad and teary eyed for words. This is simply beautiful.
LilMissKitty98

that was beautiful

I personally cried during this section from the Tales of Ba Sing Se, when Iroh sang the song, and this was a beautiful adaptation to it! Thank you very much & good job!

this made me cry! thank you so much for posting this. Poor Iroh

One word:

Beautiful.

WOW! I actually thought this was part of the real song!

R.I.P. Lu Ten

R.I.P. Mako

Excellent finish to the song it's so sad, and you get a feeling of what iroh might have felt.

-servant of time

This is beautiful! Absolutely gorgeous. You are a great songwriter and poet. Great work. :)