I like how they have a fresh start but not everything is automatically smooth.

Sorry, I'm too lazy to log in! It was awesome! You really got all the emotion in there that others skip out. Also, it's technicaly not a fangirl slashy version of Wizardy Heaven, as ADGG is canon! Yay!

Awesome fic! I love the way you follow ADGG chronologically - the character development is fascinating. I also appreciate your links to other snippets of canon, like Remus, Tonks, Sirius, James, Lily and so on. Since I'm an avid ADGG shipper, my favourite was the last scene, where "each soul was embodied, it seemed, in a material shell of themselves at the happiest times of their lives". I thought that quote was really nice. Oh, and Gellert's "musical voice" - because that's exactly how I see him!

Just a couple of typos here and there you might want to check over in your free time :)

"bewtween" (between)

"The Hallows prayed" (preyed)

"dusty tomes of Dark Art's"

(Arts)

All the best for your GCSE!

nice

I love that they get a second chance at 'life', or existence or whatnot. Truly, Dumbledore has his faults, but I don't think he deserved to have the expectations of so many on his shoulders for so long.

Wow, this sure was amazing. Really, the canonical errors (there was only one or so) didn't affect the flow at all.

Nice pairing too. xD

But of course! Writing fanfic is much better than revising ;-) And writing always helps!

Lovely story! So there is a special wizard heaven? ;-) I must be crazy, questioning the logic of a world full of magic...

I particularly liked the atmosphere you created in the first paragraph. Well done!

ooh, very good.

i've always wanted to read something ad/gg, but never really have.

and this was an excellent first one, i think. :)

great writing!

Aw, I loved this story. It's so bittersweet. I'm the same way, I'm supposed to be revising at the moment but I'm trying to convince myself that reading fanfic will help with my English GCSE. I suppose writing it probably helps more :)