| Reviews for Kidnapped |
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   Sassyvampmama chapter 18 . 12/26/2019 Thanks for sharing |
| Wild Child 1954 chapter 7 . 11/27/2019 Your story is coming along just fine and I'm enjoying reading it. I really wish you could decide wether you're writing in first or third person tense though. The jumping back and forth, sometimes in the same sentence, is disrupting. |
| divyvicki chapter 19 . 4/1/2018 This started out really well and very detailed, but felt rushed in the end! |
| divyvicki chapter 14 . 4/1/2018 The mistakes really take away from the story! |
| divyvicki chapter 13 . 4/1/2018 Lots of grammar and spelling errors in this one. I found it a bit unrealistic that she would go have a good time with Alice after discovering that James and Victoria had found her and trashed her room. Plus, shouldn’t she and Edward have explained to the rest of them about what happened to her and that there were killer vampires after her? |
| divyvicki chapter 12 . 4/1/2018 I’m so glad she didn’t order mushroom ravioli! |
| divyvicki chapter 11 . 4/1/2018 I love that he didn’t have to save her! |
| divyvicki chapter 9 . 3/24/2018 Interesting retelling of the original blood typing incident |
| divyvicki chapter 8 . 3/24/2018 I’m wondering why she won’t talk to Edward if she realizes he is different! |
| divyvicki chapter 7 . 3/24/2018 Intriguing introduction! |
| divyvicki chapter 6 . 3/13/2018 Don’t know what help her weapons are going to be defending herself from a vampire, but I guess we’ll see! |
| divyvicki chapter 5 . 3/13/2018 Didn’t really see the point in this chapter as nothing she learned will help her against Vampires! |
| divyvicki chapter 4 . 3/13/2018 Were James and Victoria a figment of her imagination? Seems like they would just kill any human policemen |
| divyvicki chapter 3 . 3/7/2018 I am a little confused by this chapter. Was she found by Victoria and James or by the police? |
| divyvicki chapter 2 . 3/7/2018 Sure hope she gets rescued soon. |
