i love this story! i love Ryoga and Ukyo!

grrr... no more? the story is so good, that i want a part 2 of this story, even for just a few more pages. but of course, i know this will lead to a love story for them. but the only thing is, i want to read it. and coming from you, like an continuation.

i also meant for chapter 5 that their parents is not even around for them, at that age. 16 and up. but oh well, its good that they are independent, just that, they are so good for each other. i really loved Ryoga and Ukyo.

poor Ukyo. felt so bad for Ryoga and Ukyo, they don't even have a guardian unlike the rest of the crew. at that age. i really loved these two.

I really enjoyed reading this. It's been a slow day at work, but this brightened my mostly mundane day. I like the part where Ryoga says to himself: "Because you tried to cheer me up when you were feeling just as miserable as I was. Because I heard you crying when you thought you were alone. Because Ranma never gave you anything and I think someone should. " when Ukyo asked him why she gave him a gift.

As usual, this story is wonderfully written. I like this pairing from Ranma 1/2 although it's not part of the cannon. I always thought that Ryoga and Ukyo suited each other better than Ryoga and Akari. That's why I read fanfiction like yours, it continues the story for me, and ties up the loose ends that are left by the creator.

what was inside the box please? btw, i love ryoga and ukyo for each other... but i am still curious what was the gift. hmmm...lol

Gawd, that was really insensitive of Ranma to do that, but I think that's how you do it it when you get to be a little more mature.
That sucked for the two of them, but heartbreaks happen atleast once in a lifetime, no?
Nice work with you narrative.

This was a great story, but I'm confused at the ending. I have no idea what just happened. Why was Ukyo crying?

Keep up the good writing.

Not normally a pairing that I enjoy, but in this case it was pulled off with considerable panache. Great writing and you actually keep the characters close enough to canon to be believable. Excellent work, as always.

Please. Don't let anyone steal your creativity. That was heart breaking. I cried in Ukyo's. Thank you. I may sound like a gaybo or a sissy. (I'm a girl) But Thanks For Amking this. I can hardly put this it words. But these few words are from the heart.

and i actually like it, this is my second comment btw, i cant write a comment on chapter 3. cause i already left some review in there. i just hope that this story didnt end too soon.. but oh well... its nice... i am requesting for a sequel if ever your inspired to do so in this story.. and what was in the box? thank u

no, u didnt suck at romance at all... if only you could continue... sighed!... more please

This was so sweet!

You are really good writer! And Ukoy and Ryoga are so

cute couple 3!

Well i have to say this is a good story... Well written, good job staying in character, and emotions that you can almost feel. It's definitly one of the better stories i've read based on this subject.

Dang. I wish I could write like you!

Ciao!

What was in teh box? What was it! Tell me! I have to know! D8

Anyway, this was a pretty sweet and occasionally moving little story. Good work!