Lovely.

lol sexy!

This was great. Very realistic.

Though I felt that Bella and Edward were a little out of character, you did a great job writing this. I like how it was romantic and not just lusty. Lovely job!

-Sara

That was different, but i still liked it. Because the one thing that i noticed about all the other lemons with twilight was that no body had on a condom like it didn't matter, because i do think that humans or even vampires for that matter can get pregnant!_

Let me worship you.

Thankyou! truly you have no idea how good it feels to actually read a wedding fic involving Bella and Edward that is believable and completely in character. They way you wrote Bella and Edwards reaction to touching each other this intimately and in places never done before was superb and completely real. Also I loved the fact that when Edward was making love to Bella he said words such as 'beautiful' instead of stupid comments that may sound more hotter but are totally not him. Overall I loved your story! and I think i'm just glad that you actually mention Bella feeling the pain of when he first entered her ... seriously some people leave that out and make Bella completely enjoy it straight away *shakes head* it kills me. Anyways great story! Congrats.

-Anabella

Excellent job! I love how in character both Bella and Edward was. It was -almost- like Stephanie Meyer wrote it herself. :)

I don't think I've ever realized how much Edward's formality bothered me. He's like a robot, but a vampire... robot...?

I like that you tried to make it realistic opposed those who try to make them both sound experienced.

Good job. _

o saucy! ur ryt tho it wouldnt be that great for bella the 1st time. maybe u could right another one after B and E have had a fair few experiences? cuz u write lemons so well lol.

nice...you made it seem so romantic...god, i wish i was bella there :)

i love that you made it more ralistic...but most of the people that write twilight lemons make them amazing becaus edward is amazing and good at everything...so naturally people expect them to have amazıng sex...but i love how sweet and gentle you made him...

Oh wow this was amazing! and beautifully written!.You should write another chapter but make it Edward's POV of their first time!.

I really liked it, but I think Bella would have felt amazing too. I know in REAL life, it doesn't always play out like that, but in the Twilight universe...it totally does.

Because seriously, who REALLY finds the most perfect guy who is completely devoted to them and amazing in every way? Very few people. But in Twilight, Bella does, so I feel that as a Twilight fic, it would be more realistic for her first time to be as spectacular and mind-blowing as his. You know what I mean?

I'm not coming down on you, I enjoyed the fic, I'm just saying that when you enter the story world, what happens in real life doesn't always stick, unless you did an AU, all-human thing.

that was definitely the most realistic first time I've ever read on here.

this isn't a criticism but I'd expect more emotion from Edward and Bella. Their love would make it a bit more special.

now that was the most realistic wedding night that i have ever read! Thank You!