| Reviews for The Duality of Android 18 |
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   Wikked Grin chapter 3 . 3/14/2018 The first two chapters were very well done. The third was exciting, but it felt a little rushed, especially at the end. Good stpry, though. |
| holtjustin04 chapter 3 . 5/16/2017 Happy to see krillen find his happy ending |
| Kitty in the Box chapter 3 . 1/2/2017 I like it but it's frantic. it had a wonderful plot but things were a bit disjointed. I'm still happy with the ending though. |
| Andad 18 chapter 2 . 5/23/2016 Adam boyfriend and Andad 18 girlfriend I cook kiss me |
| 404ANF404 chapter 3 . 12/23/2015 Just finished chapter three. Thank you so much for posting this and let the writer know he bested the entire Fanfiction site about this couple |
| 404ANF404 chapter 2 . 12/23/2015 This. is the best story. I have ever read. in my entire life. o(o) VERY VERY VERY AWESOME WORK |
| Storm-Anime-FFWriter chapter 3 . 12/5/2015 Two thumbs up to the writer! And the person who posted it! :) |
| Storm-Anime-FFWriter chapter 2 . 12/5/2015 Nice! How Marron came from Maron! It all fits in the story! Awesome! |
| Storm-Anime-FFWriter chapter 1 . 12/5/2015 Best Krilin and Android 18 fic! |
| Silverwolf247 chapter 2 . 11/14/2015 Eh that was okay, it's by no means bad, but to say it's the best K18 fanfiction out there would be giving it too much credit, maybe it's because I sincerely doubt the cyborgs would try to murder Krillin, in the show they weren't really murderers outside of son Goku, which I'm pretty sure was just programming, and even if they were I feel like their smart enough to not want to risk having one of his stronger friends kill them both for it. I also found the stuff with Maron just kind of pointless, I mean it feels like a petty way to have them get married and it didn't really lead to much conflict it just happened and then it was over. Also, although future 18 was kind of cool and brought up some interesting points, the resolution to those points, a little rushed and non-nonsensical, why does 18 age more than the cyborg whose older to her. But, a lot of stuff was nice 18 getting drunk and her thoughts on children were interesting, along with her insecurities about being real and kudos for not making 17 the cliche jealous insane brother and the characters were pretty in character, or at least not extremely out of character. All in all, i'd give a B- |
| NightRevolt chapter 3 . 3/17/2015 this is just perfect writing gold here 10/10. |
| walker chapter 1 . 3/17/2015 this is just too good. |
| asylum89 chapter 3 . 2/13/2015 Wow Really good story, Props deserved |
| Min's awesomeness chapter 3 . 11/7/2014 Great story, really enjoyed it! |
| Guest chapter 3 . 10/26/2014 Awesome story funny ending |
