Infinite love to this fanfic! thank you (L)

I'm not crying, you're crying

I love this movie, and I think the pairing Silver/Jim is very adorable.

Your portrayal of both characters is very decent, and I don't think that Jim was being a coward by being so depressed at all. You did a very good job.

I can only hope you will write more about this pairing, since it is so hard to find and you certainly were up to the task. Again, I think that this fic is very well-writen. :)

Thank you so much for writing this.

Opinion: I bow down to your general awesomeness. This was an absolutely fantastic chapter, and I can't even begin to describe my feelings on it. Sheer wonderfulness and just completely perfect! Teriffic job!

G,P,S: All great. _

OotC: Wally and Wendy are pure win, wonderfulness, and general awesomeness! I couldn't stop smiling throughout the whole conversation. Literally. _ Then when Jim went to see Silver, I was on the edge of my seat. Again, literally. _ Freaking awesome chapter, totally great job!

Grammar, punctuation, spelling: All great.

Opinion of the chapter: OH MY GOSH I CAN'T BELIEVE EVAN TOLD DEBORAH THAT JIM WAS MENTALLY CHALLENGED TO GET HER TO FORGIVE HIM! Actually, back up, never mind, I totally can. XD Great chapter, I absolutely cannot wait to see Jim and Silver's reunion! And how Evan is now with Deborah is awesome. (Or is he? I guess we'll see.) Teriffic chapter, awesome job!

Grammar: Excellent

Punctuation: Ditto.

Spelling: Looks good.

Opinion of the Chapter: Wow. Talk about intense. Wonderful job of showing the emotions, especially Jim's. I wonder how Evan is going to get Deborah to forgive him? Loved this chapter, great job!

Grammar: Again, excellent.

Punctuation: Same.

Spelling: You spelled probably as proubly, otherwise, it looked good.

Opinion of the Chapter: Once again this was excellent. I like the little tidbits of Evan showing he cares about Jim, the way you show Jim's depression, Mikks, and how Evan thinks Sarah is hot. Great chapter. _

Okay, I've got the charcoal and the matches, so break out the hot dogs so we can eat while I tell you about this chapter. _~

Grammar: Excellent as far as I saw.

Punctuation: Look above please.

Spelling: You wrote conceded (as in to concede an arguement)instead of conceited (as in arrogant little jerk). Otherwise, it all looked good. _

Opinion of the chapter: I think this was excellent, it really makes me want to read more and I'm eager to see if Jim meets up with Silver again. I also kind of like Evan. You made him interesting.

This was absolutely delightful! A treat to read and I enjoyed every word. I love the simplicity of your words, they read like real life...and don't get me started on this relationship :) I've been a fan for years! Wonderful work and may the English Gods keep you literate.

Cute, really cute. But, question:

How was Deborah a mutant?

Okay, CUTEST TREASURE PLANET FAN FIC, EVER! XD Espeacially the end. The fan girl in me thanks you whole heartidly! I also loved how you expressed so many emotions in this Fan Fic. It wasn't just Happy, sad, love, and desire. It was anger, depression, confusion, etc. That makes a good story. And I'm really glad I'm not the only one who has a desire to write a fan fic... about a fan fic... lol. Great story!

OHMIGAWD! I started to giggle, cry, and scream at the end of this! A very VERY amazing job, my dear. And really, it's so epic how you made a fic of a fic seem so... orginally yours. Bravo!

Thank you so much for all your efforts and hardwork poured into this fic. It's really amazing! I loved all your short stories in "Trifle's", and "Restoring Imperfection" reassured me that your creativity as well as writing skills are totally marvelous, and above all, I particularly adore your way of J/S portrayal. While it includes pretty much of casual touches - like, innocent hugs and kisses - the main focus is always on their wholehearted interactions. In Ch. 6, as I followed Jim's emotional transition which obviously you've dedicated a great deal of time and efforts to, I could feel Jim's joy at first, then angst, and at last earnest love. Same goes with Silver! I could feel his pain when he explained the reason behind his choice (of not writing to Jim for a whole year).

Overall storyline was also fantastic, with "leaving someone behind" as a subtle but unfaltering background theme. Kudos to your wonderful talent, and thank you again for kindly sharing your work with us! As a J/S (or J & S, as I love both of shipping and platonic mentor/protege relationship) fan, I'm so grateful for the fact that a great creator like you finds J/S (or J&S) favorable! :-)

guh. o-o

-dies-

signed,

onewhowatches :3