Okay. I dont know how I feel about this. But I’m glad they were able to work through it without a complete explosion.

Damn! I was still enjoying this!

Omg Sirius is the best, I cannot stop laughing

Ohh I liked this a lot.

its great, really funny (especially Sirius, i love the way you make him such a good friend. i always thought he would be that way too) :D

Sirius is a great friend :)

That was brillant. Never read something like that, James being angry and everything. It only Would have Been nice to know that they are together in the beginning, i happened to think that they are only heads and nicer, so I was kinda surprised, when Lily apologized like that

I love it! Great story!

This was totally wonderfully perfect, but the moment I fell completely in love with it was Sirius at the end. I love them all so much.

*squeaks* too cute. Love Lily and James. :)

That was low. The story was good though :) I just can't help but be mad at Lily. She should have known how important quidditch is for James. In relationships, I always think that a little sacrifice alternately from each side is needed.

... so the one shots amazing and I looove all your other writing but one thing bugs me . why is it that when I read about James playing quidditch he's always put as chaser when , after checking the first book and movie it says that he was seeker? I couldn't think of anyone better to ask but you, so , would you mind explaining?

You writing is lovely, but this Lily is so annoying. I understand that she needs help with Head duties, but it was ONE night. She knows how important this is for him, yet she doesn't care. Instead of talking to him about it, like people usually do when they're in a relationship, she goes to McGonagall so he can't play. And, Remus is on HER side,because "she feels horrible", and James thinks he "doesn't deserve her"? And McGonagall "saved his relationship"? And she has the right to use his snappy comments against him? Lovely.
I like Sirius, tho. He's funny.

loved it :)

Would it be wrong to say I liked Sirius more in this fic than Jily?
"About face! There's one more maneuver we need to go over. I just came up with it. It's daring and dangerous and bloody brilliant and it's definitely going to win us the game, so get your asses out there without complaining or I'm going to bench you."

"I have homework!"

"Are you mad? It's ten o'clock at night!"

"Bloody arse."

"It's raining harder now! Can we please just quit for the night?"

"I SAID ABOUT FACE! GO!" Sirius bellows above the grumbles. "ON YOUR BROOMS!"

HILARIOUS!