| Reviews for Origami |
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   OmnomnomChomp chapter 1 . 12/19/2010 Aaw, so sweet! I think I'm going to cry... |
| SchemingAlchemist chapter 1 . 11/1/2009 I liked it a lot! |
| StoryofGreen chapter 1 . 3/30/2009 Really pretty writing! |
| Innocent KH chapter 1 . 2/18/2009 Aww! That's adorable! Gosh, Zexion is so cute! The way u wrote this just made the whole thing...beautiful :D ANd the idea...is WONDERFUL! LUURVED THIS STORY! RaWR! . Hehe! |
| Crazeh Fangirl chapter 1 . 1/29/2009 Great story! But I so eager to read the part when they send psycho-daddy to jail. Sorry but I love crime-shows. ; Since you didn't go on this is amazing as well. 8D |
| foreverxXxsamexXx chapter 1 . 12/30/2008 *le gasp* One of the bestest Zemyx fics I've read in a while! Ahh, vulnerable Zexy, how cute... ZEMYX FTW!1 :3 |
| Sky Blue Baby chapter 1 . 10/30/2008 The style of writing really went with the story and helped it flow. The plot was wonderful, but a bit confusing at the start. |
| Finnegan G. Drake chapter 1 . 7/6/2008 In my opinion (not that counts for much), this was really well written. Most one-shots I've seen, particularly the romance ones, end up rushed and jumbled. However, your's was smooth and steady, without a huge, confusing pile-up of action at the climax. I thought I saw some spelling mistakes (nothing major that I ca recall), but that may just be the after-affects of having done so much reading in the past few hours. Kudos to you. |
| YomikoJeevas chapter 1 . 6/25/2008 T-T I nearly cried...poor Zexy and his abusing daddy...were I Demyx I would've had Axel KILL HIM! But it had a happy ending yays! Great job! |
| Unmei-Kibou chapter 1 . 5/29/2008 i liked this one a lot too. really sad but still good! |
| persephassax chapter 1 . 5/16/2008 w that was heartwarmingly sweet. nah.. poor zexy, he's always getting the short end of the stick, but on the bright side he gets demyx to go with it. Axel's never gonna quit is he? crazy freak (but so lovable)... Great job. Highly enjoyable. _H-ai |
| SparkyNZ chapter 1 . 5/15/2008 Aw. Poor Zexy! I like the fact that you made Xenahort the evil, ...um... I can't remember the word right now... Oh! Child-bashing dad, and that I hope that this will be a two-shot or more! I like the crane idea. How many has he made now, and how many does he need to make? You should consider these things, considering he makes about 65 a day. |
| sana-chan9 chapter 1 . 5/9/2008 aw! i'm glad meanie xehanhort's in jaily cause he's bad yay for sexy zexy! D |
| cosmikku chapter 1 . 5/2/2008 I really loved this. at the beginning of the story, I was confused, but as I got into it, I really liked it. the ending is really sweet |
| Zume Rokkata chapter 1 . 4/28/2008 -hugs- Oh, this was just beautiful! A very, very, very well done to you! What was 'the truth' anyway? |
