Very nice one! :)

I agree with the reviewers. Excellent as always. I just wish you didn't always do such short stories!

I was relaly into this fic, and looking forward to seeing where it was going, but then it ended...

And its status is complete...

To me it just seems to end a little early /

i really love your writing style though.

Her softness made his nerve endings tingle as her lips teased his and finally he leaned into the kiss and slid his tongue inside her mouth.

*dies*

That was an awesome piece, hon :)

I loved your One-Shot! this part made me shiver:

She leaned forward invitingly and brushed her lips against his.

Sensation.

Great!

I love it!

More Soon PLEASE!

Oh ,this is very good! I really like the dialogue at the end! Hope you'll continue it soon!

Great job!