This was really cute and fun.

Cute

One of the best short stories I've ever read.

This story was amazing I loved it!

very nice story.

I just wanted a good darn sex scene man. But man did I love this story! It's so sweet! And so different and I think that's why I like it

Hey I have to all are you from Newfoundland cause Toni Marie Wiseman and Fred Hutton was so funny to see their names in this story. I thought it was great, thanks for a good story and a great laugh. Tammy, St. John's, NL

I was never a reader. I started out of bordum. Fell in love with Twilight. Now that I've found
fan fiction, I can't get enough. I absolutely love love stories and this this is one of my favorites.
Thank you so much.

This is so cute! Adorable!

Love it

that was adorable!

Good. I loved the underwear incident. It was funny how all of them pair up due to an incident and the news was also a plus. Thanks for sharing

I really liked the story, the way everyone met and kinda became soul mates is pretty cute. I loved the way the characters connected especially Edward and Bella. I think you have potential and keep up the good work! :D

Cute ending to a cute story. I like that they have no intention of moving Bella bald to her own apartment. That she's pretty much at Edward's for good. Fun time reading. Thank you!

Why would she be freaked out about Edward seeing her panties? Also, she could've thrown her bags up to her people if the door was only six inches from the floor. Glad they got out of there. Really glad that Edward was there waiting for her when she came out of her room. I knew they'd be hungry . . . lol. Looking forward to EPOV.