Reviews for Apple and Grape
yaoilover505 chapter 10 . 8/13/2013
Please update!
Mukuro234 chapter 10 . 6/5/2013
this is very funny I love to read this
MusicAngel13 chapter 1 . 2/11/2013
wow suman is eighteen and he is a cop u don't see that often
TunaSFX chapter 1 . 2/10/2012
your ideas are good, but u seriously need a beta reader. you need to work on your grammar and proofread your work. also you need to work on descriptions. if you want me to help beta, feel free to PM me
ofnisaofunsdf chapter 10 . 11/15/2010
! WRITE MORE SOON PLEASE!
ofnisaofunsdf chapter 2 . 11/15/2010
I WAS ABOUT TO EXPLODE WITH GIGGLES WHEN HE GAVE HER THE FLOWERS!
ofnisaofunsdf chapter 1 . 11/15/2010
so far its really cute!
walkingdictionary chapter 10 . 9/10/2010
Your grammar is as good as my 10 year old sister writing a fanfic about allen giving birth to 1214539688758391285 babies
hiuh chapter 10 . 4/26/2009
continue please
MitarashiiDango chapter 10 . 3/10/2009
Who's the blond!

i can't work out who the blond is!

gah...

yea go destroy kanda!
Junior Tomarry chapter 10 . 1/5/2009
I'm glad you accept flames other authoress/author doesn't like flame yay! This is fic Yullen and tykixallen *thumbs up* good job at the pairings. :)
Potato Monarch chapter 10 . 12/30/2008
This story is really good. It's interesting... But why do you keep on ending the chapters at vital parts of the stories...

Also, do you have a set time when you update the chapters?
Muffarino chapter 10 . 12/13/2008
This story is really awesome. I love the crap crab, that was so randomly funny the I forced all my friends into reading this fanfic, and they all loved it! I like all the yulleniness and TykixAllen. I'm not trying to be mean but I really hat Ashelia, she really pisses me off, she's TOO perfect that it makes everyone else seem like crap, Why not give Allen some power too?
Lala-tan chapter 10 . 11/4/2008
MY GAWD. You're a genius!~ You really made my day (even though its 11.31pm now) with this! I loved the well-educated crab that graduated from crap crab university, tyki's random song, tyki's marriage proposal, lenalee, eshi and the PS2, and the komurins!

Well done! continue soon please? _

-lala

.la~
jiuytiydruetsyr36sryedrytfgyuh chapter 6 . 9/9/2008
IF TIKI BEATS KANDA I WILL KILL HIM... SLOWLY...WITH A POTATO PEELER...A BLUNT ONE
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