Love it! It would seem like a plausible reason as to why Gin's eyes seemingly change colors. Please keep up the good work!

Nice theory! It fits Gin, to be doing something like that.

LASER BEAMS PEW PEW PEW! Sorry, I think I shall have to yoink that idea.

I'll start with this: You have a fascinating take on the series eye-color issue. I love the way you interpreted it and put a mood or condition to each color.

One thing that I caught, though, was a slight change between the usual past-tense and present-tense of the writing. It didn't throw me off or anything, and I don't know if it was intentional or not, but I thought I'd call on it.

Anyway, excellent writing! I hope to see more from you soon.

Cool story! Makes perfect sense as to why he keeps his eyes closed!

Well written. Good job.

I totally agree with - the way you write is exceptional. :) All the way through the fic, you captured how I imagine Gin's mind works, not to mention the many theories about the state of his eyes were extremely amusing to follow!

I think it was good, the way you write is exceptional I never thought of Gin's eyes like that truly you made it clever and rather fun to read. Anyone with a sense to know what a good fic is and whether one isn't should know that this one was pretty good. I look forward to your other entries.