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   Forgetful Pizza chapter 1 . 1/18/2015 i love this story |
| futuregirl1709 chapter 1 . 9/12/2010 Ow that was one adorable Edward. I love reading his POV (he's - how predictable, haha - my favorite character). Nice work! |
| Wake-up Soon chapter 1 . 2/28/2009 Wow! This was really brilliant! I loved this little insight into Edward's mind, && I think my favourite line was that one about oil - it made me giggle. x3 Now, m'off to read some more of your stuff. (Y) Anna.x.(: |
| luvemmett chapter 1 . 8/21/2008 nice story |
| Isabela Rosalie chapter 1 . 6/10/2008 I absolutly love reading things in Edward's Point Of View, especially about the first night he spent with Bella. I really loved this one. :] |
| Kalee chapter 1 . 6/3/2008 I like it. There is only one mistake I noticed. In the first paragraph, 2nd to last sentence: without is one word. In the 2nd paragraph you spelt it right. I can't wait to read more of your stories, well written may I add. |
| moonangel511 chapter 1 . 5/24/2008 That was the romantic one shot I have read. I loved it so much. |
| AmberGlow2 chapter 1 . 5/24/2008 Very well written and interesting! |
| leighermickey chapter 1 . 5/22/2008 o...m...g. that was amazing...it was so edward - all the connections you made...it was amazing... very well done! |
| Sakiru Yume chapter 1 . 5/1/2008 That was pretty good. All I have to say. |
| Windy-08 chapter 1 . 4/27/2008 one word: ADORABLE! |
| Abstractly Sydney chapter 1 . 4/26/2008 I LOVE IT! |
| Daddy's Little Cannibal chapter 1 . 4/26/2008 You can actually write. I'm so freaking proud of you. lol. A couple of grammar mistakes but I like the plot and the writing. :D |
| m r s . a u t h o r chapter 1 . 4/19/2008 I really like it. You don't have to change a thing. I've got no critism |
| eilidh23 chapter 1 . 4/19/2008 wow that was beautiful! I loved it, nice work! I love seeing Edward's inner turmoil and anguish. |
