| Reviews for The Chapter that Never Was |
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   Flabbergasted001 chapter 1 . 5/23/2012 this was actually pretty funny! i love it! |
| xpossibly chapter 1 . 10/4/2008 I loved the last line. Dunno why. XD |
| fire19 chapter 1 . 4/18/2008 i think you were right ... this is really good but the edited version suits the tone better ... but this is well written for a draft D |
| shierysh chapter 1 . 4/16/2008 Aww! That was so cute! . Loved the ending btw.. XD X3 |
| ThisWasOnceAnActiveAccount chapter 1 . 4/16/2008 this is adorable! |
| princess-oro chapter 1 . 4/16/2008 I think this is really nice :) And yes, Sakuno is the cutest person ever and Nanjiroh's description of her is so spot-on. The line “Well, if she takes after her grandmother, she’ll be really pretty. If she takes after her grandfather, she’ll be twice as pretty. If she takes after her mother, she’ll be beautiful. If she takes after her father, she’ll be twice as beautiful.” is really cute! Gosh, the oxymoron is rather entertaining! |
