Oh i cant wait to find out what happens next! Please please PLEASE update soon!

very good. very detailed and heart breaking :( can't wait for jake and allison to see each other again...

and you're grammar was really weak in this chapter. watch that eh?

Oh my god! JAKE! ER! I want more! I'm dying here! You are so mean...i love it! :)

-HWR

!i love it!

O! i luv this story! It's amazing! You have to keep writing! Update soon! I'm in love and my heart belongs 2 this story!

HWR

O! Cliff hanger! lol :) good chapter, i'm a big fan of this story!

“Allison, I’ll bring you home. I’m coming to get you.”

don't know why but this line made me cry. Such a good chapter and keep it up, it's SO good and I love how it still went along with the storyline of New Moon really well. UPDATE AY SEP

O, you posted :-D Loved the chapter, I love how Jake hesitates to tell Bella about his mother. So she went cliff-diving without him, heh? Will he pull her up in time? Post soon ;-)

Hi there! I'm a new reader. I gotta say I dig the plot, and I love the sweet side of Jacob you brought out. I love the discussion concerning imprinting, I thought it was truly insightful, and it helped me understand Jacob's feelings toward Bella better. I also enjoy reading your Bella's POV, it serves as a purpose, and it's not just an unnecessary change of POV, it permits the reader to see the growing gasp between Jacob and Bella. I like Allison as well, and I tend not to like new characters added to the story, but she seems very sweet and lovable. I think it's sad to see the one-sided love Jacob feels toward Bella, and I hope it'll somehow work out between them. I really love your Jake :)

I haven't finished reading all the chapters, but I'm really enjoying it thus far, so I just felt like reviewing. Please, do update soon though!

Oh wow really good but do you have a beta? Some of your grammer is off. It's really no big deal, but i was just wondering

WHAT THE HELL MAN!

great ending so good :)

but a little short was the only problem, let's see a super long chapter next :) who needs school?

Poor Jake. T.T

Very nice twist, though! I like it!

I still can't say that I'm necessarily a fan of Allison, though...

I love the way you're telling this story. I'm a Team Edward person... but Jacob has a warm, snuggly part of my heart and seeing things through his eyes is great.

Can't wait to read more!

This chapter just proves mt point that meyerpires ruin lives.

Whoaa, why the heck would Billy keep those from him? D:

Well, I kind of figured that SOMEONE was hiding the letters. Either that or Allison was writing them only to stuff them in a drawer somewhere.

Muy interesante, no?

Har har.