This is just... wow. Loved this.

O.O jjbdhusjisinegdjdjdy. *speachless* oh fuck. Fuck, dude...this is amazing...i meean, sirius black dude.. if i could think coherently i would tel you about the akazing literary quality of this piece, the emotion and well writtenness, but..im kinda speachless. XD

Magnificent.

Wow- you had me hooked with just the explaination. It sounded interesting, and it definately was! The way every move, every mood and emotion, putting it all into elements and seasons; it was extremely creative. Really well done~ Great story!

I really enjoyed it :3 You're a good writer and I liked the theme of comparing Mello to seasons. You had good descriptions and described the character of Mello well xD Great story~

This is absolutely beautiful. I knew I wanted to favourite this story after reading two sentences. It's so soothing to read, the word flow is perfect. The musing of the seasons portrays so much emotion, and the imagery is gorgeous

This was really beautiful- I really loved how you described Mello's personality, winter totally suits him. Amazing.

There's a sort of simple beauty to this that works so well - I absolutely love it.

I love it. Your writing is very poetic, and you capture well the timult and change of the seasons. It's a little angsty too, but in a good way: short and bittersweet.

that was so sad but it was just as good. i love this story it almost made me cry and that's a hard thing to do! lol keep up the great work

*cries* This is really good! I commend you. I love your descriptions, so full of imagery and desperate emotions. I love the passion that pops right off the page, and the sadness that sears your own heart. I wanted to cling to Mello to the end along with Matt. Simply wonderful.

Amazing. One of the saddest things I've ever read.

*cries loudly, sobbing uncontrolably, screaming in agony*...-sniffle sniffle-...I-I...That made...My heart..B-B-B-BREAK!

Oh...dear God. That was everything anyone could ever ask for in writing. I was a little skeptical about a story based on the seasons. I was expecting "And he was prettyful like spring...and stuffs" but you blew my mind. You wrote a perfect story.

Gorgeous.

The imagery in this was staggering.

I absolutely LOVE how you used the seasons to personify our favorite tempest.