LOOOVE IT !

Interesting

It was... Wonderful. Honestly.
I could relate to Kim a lot as I often think I am not worthy of love or interest. And... Reading exactly what I feel was breathtaking. I didn't think my self-esteem was that low but seeing Kim having that same self-esteem as me had make me realise that it was pretty serious. And it has opened my eyes on my situation. Like her, I will do my best to be happy and to be selfish sometimes. Yes, I deserve everything I have. Yes, I have the right to only think of me if this is what makes me happy and strong.
That's why I want to thank you for this wonderful and well-written fanfiction 3
Have a nice day!
(English is not my first language so sorry in advance if there is any mistake)

I am loving this story!

im gushing from the cuteness! 3

cute!

wow, i love the feeling and the realistic emotion you give off in your writing, when i write i always try and make it have a vibe, but fail. but her your writing feels so naturally done with a witty edge . Do you write alot? i love this story already. i really like your writing and thoughts that have bine put into this story.

I like how you portray Jared.

Great 1st chap!

I like your story so far. Just one thing. Jared's eyes are brown not blue.

Hehe I thought it might have been Sam :) like the warmth was familiar ( I thought it was going to be simmilar to what happed with bella and Sam)

Sounds like a wonderful happily ever after.

The ring sounds very pretty.

I hope Sam finally accepts her.

:) I like the fire. I hope Kim doesn't fight it too much.