this was so ryo! How he is angry in one second and totaly peaceful in the next. Keep up the good work!

great work! so there is still some hope in the exo force fandom... I realy like how you always drop hints about ryos, and rikas past, but never tell to much, keep up the good work dude!

Dang, this story was awesome! I love how Ryo is so stressed out about being a genius. It really brings out his character that he really just wants to be a normal person in a world where everyone expects him to be brilliant. I've said this before, but I'll say it again: Brainiac5, you ROCK! I don't meet a lot of girls who are as obsessed with something as I am, but you really take the cake!

It's me again, I'm so gonna bug you.

I think I told you before, but I'm saying it again, I totally love your ideas. Throughout all the adventures I invented when I was younger, I never thought about the idea of Ryo having a sister. The ending was a little weird, but the story was great. I was hoping that Rika and Ryo had, I dunno, faced the robots and Ryo left her behind by accident or something.

Anyway, you just made both Hikaru and Ryo my favorite characters! Congrats! (And I totally enjoy all your other stories)

Applause! This idea is so much better than my brother's idea of "little siblings who are almost exact duplicates of the original"

Happy ending! Drama! Applause!

And it was drama I can relate to. I mean, who doesn't have a sibling?

~Asterisk*

I can't believe no one else reads this. It's their loss.

Anyway, watch out for rampant italics. There seemed to be a few of those.

~Asterisk*

Mmkay...

I liked this one. Adding a sibling is pretty standard, though...actually, adding new characters in general is pretty standard. Never mind that.

I really liked the arm-pulling part, and I loved Ryo's four proofs that the world is ending...he's probably right.

However, there were just a few little things to pick on...

“Both of your battle machines need fixing,” Ryo piped up, ‘appearing’ between the two much like a character in an anime might.

Okay, I can see it in my head, but it's not very fluid. This isn't an anime, this is a story. I'm just not sure it works...

~Asterisk*