Amazing!

... I wanted to cry. Poor Beyond, he never deserved that...

-Ella;$

Ah, poor B...This story really does do him justice, though!

I love this so much. This is the story I've always been trying to find. You showed BB in his character and I love it. Thank you!

loved it.

Is this how it ends in the book except a little different, or is just your version of an alternative ending to it?

I need to read the book...

But still, nice job! 8D

Thanks for the closure, I'm pretty much accepting this as canon at this point. I hated how they just shipped him off with a little blurb about how Kira offed him. This was a really good story, thanks for it!

This. Is. AWESOME.

This is one of the few stories I've seen with Beyond actually being In Character. I salute you.

What a wonderful way of writing B's personality. I mean, even if this is a "first draft," as you called it, I think it is wonderful as is. It does need a few things, probably (hey, I know how authors always think that their writings need more), but I'm sure you'll find them out without my help (...you probably will, I mean, I'm not much help with things like this). I hope to read more of your fics soon.

I agree with you: the ending to Another Note just didn't do him justice. However, I think this story goes some way towards making up for that. Poor B.

This is so good! And the first time I've seen someone's take on what happened after the LABB Murder Case actually. Beyond was such an underused character; it's great being able to read his thoughts on Wammy House, Mr. Wammy himself, and L. Nicely done.

Omg this is so amazing...

I disagree with you though, it-it wasn't neccersary to kill him! Okay, probably, but still, he could have just spent the rest of his life in prison? Ah, I wish he would still be alive.

I love your story. You don't get to read what happens afterwards and nobody writes about it, so it's really interesting. Heh, loved the 'he dies in 13 days'. I already had the hunch.

It's a very good realistic chapter and you've written the emotions down very well. I imagine him wanting to die. Prisons aren't fun at all.

Even though I'd love the idea of him and L meeting, it really wasn't bound to happen. It isn't realistic, sigh. But hey, you've got imagination for that.

Aw this fic made me cry! BB is awesome!

great story. mentioning the shinigami was a nice touch. maybe B was somehow aware of them in his subconcious? makes you wonder...

sorry for the spelling and good luck in the future.

Wow...I love you for this one. You're doing BB's character justice with this beautiful, sad, fascinating one-shot. And I'm sorry for doing ill play on words, I didn't intend to be ironic.