This breaks my heart. Why, why, WHY would she choose Will? It's the one thing I hate about these movies :'(

Utterly passionate fic! Love it! Great job!
P.S. the song is awesome,it's already in my ipod!

beautiful :)

I don't normally read M stories, but this was amazing! I loved the way you described stuff (not THAT stuff), for example, ELizabeth's felings for Jack. Your style of writing is stunningly beautiful and flows perfectly. XD

Luv, Luv, Luv,

Artemis Sherwood

I know you said to leave a long review but I only have 7 words to say to you:

I Loved It Please Write A Sequel.

:D

great story!

Ah, now that was just the best love scene... And the last part pinched my tum-tums, when Jack snaps it shut, it was such a lovely detail.

(BUT, my darling, you keep writing "then" instead of "than".)

I really enjoyed this one-shot. You write better than almost any one on this site. Adding you to favourite authors as of now...Oh, and you did the M-stuff very well, very tasteful and sweet, better than some older people I could mention probably including myself. Keep up the good work darling...and don't just write fanfic. I think you've got the potential to become a professional author, most likely a bestselling one, with this kind of awesome prose. Thanks for sharing your talent, I appreciated it! And that Imogen Heap song is beautiful, I'm glad this story caused me to discover it. It's definitely a favourite now!

Oh...lovely!

Sweet, trusting and quite, quite beautiful. So totally in character too!

If this is your first stab at M rated fiction, then heaven help us when you have more experience of it! Very, very well done...this was touchingly fantastic. Go girl!

M I must say I enjoyed that very much And if I'm not mistaken(I'm actually just guessing) is what Jack was looking at the compass? Very good job!

Loved this story...and the Song fits a situation im in at the moment..I can't wait to Download it. This was very well written, and the story goes well with the song. :)

Oh my gosh, that was freakin AMAZING

The imagery was beautiful, the dialogue was all perfect,everyone was completely in character and wonderfully portrayed...you are amazingly talented! Continue writing, please, and especially Sparrabeth!

Jack was just...stunning in the story. You wrote him SO well.

*sits pitiful-ly in chair*

that was terribly, insanely, and heartbreakngly, beoynd words - sad. when i read the last line i was jsut sitting miserably with tears in my eyes. the fic was amazing, and i loved how you described elizabeth's feelings and jack's reactions. but it was undeniably sad. and now i really really really need to go read one of your happy JackxElizabeth stories before i decide to walk the plank as a blob of tears.

amazing fic.

Ele-chan

Wow you are a wonderful writer. The story was beautiful. I loved it.

Oh my gosh! This was such a good fanfic! In fact I think it's the best POTC fic I've ever read. I loved it because this totally could have happend in the movie, you managed to work it in perfectly and make it seem realistic. It was so awesome and you did a really good job with it. I look forward to reading more stories from you. :)