If they do become friends...I hope she actually pays quil to turn her down and maybe ask Melanie to stop so she doesn’t have to keep paying

...I just realized with that last ‘pack’ he may or may not have been talking about his ‘6 pack’

Lol

Jesus Christ and it was even a full second day and I’m already in tears

I would’ve still left to hell with Jake the idiot

20. Chapter 20. Eplilouge 2. Kara's pov then ALIEN RATTLESNAKES Had b eeeen turn ed weith OOOthers theen Volturi caught wind had Shipfitpires You there Who created her Destroy her with the tribe m y screasm s she surrenders Kidnapped with eight thousan ds Drained of as all the very all with them M urdered with them with them then then Venom was In to us with then became to far strongest then a rattling Shaking force Newsfeed She's Telekinetic it's Telekinesis Left for dead with them b eaten then then drained were as all of more the three fou corpse was dying then was Next with them with Child With venom Bitten from m e Changed with them then the guard found m e with kids Chained Screaming then Executed With theeeem Bring them then we report she's drained dead good these immortal children must be destroyed with the tribe's immortal children these ones are sentenced to death forever b y us/all bitten from here what then the five we fin d you guilty they are dead then ASlice had ass vision ASlice tell us they are coming for her who Volturi of her planetary powers blacking outside with them Sliced from here then im pasled then TTTorn from here un able to bear kids b rought here we discovered they hold as all of n ewborns had hyb rids are sentenced to death then ATOMIZED! Broken as all of from then All of guasds bitten freely theen Ersaed of from n uked with other on es the n too laaate W

I think there was a slight typo st the end of the chapter; it says Melanie instead of Ashley. But I love the plot!

I feel like a slight character flaw is that she opens up too easily. I mean she did just say she's been verbally and emotionally abused and there was no reaction. Otherwise, the story's great!

She is too forgiving, too nice. I...can't finish this. Sorry.

Very good story. good job

Great work!

This is my second time reading this and I got to say that this is a great story! It still brought me to tears. It's great! Also I really like Ben! He seem to be a great character! So I'm curious, if you're not busy with your life, if you can a Ben and Oc story. It doesn't have to long. A one shot would even do it, but I just want to see Ben with somebody/imprint.

I really enjoyed this story. It's short, sweet and too the point but also very complex. GOOD JOB :D

i really love this story...its so sweet i want to know if you will do a sequel!

I just want to say that your story was just beautiful! So~ wonderful!

oh my gosh! i totally love this story! it will forever be one of my all time faves!:)