I thought that the story was well writen. I enjoyed reading it. I would like to see the story continue.

i wanted to ask if this is going to be a hika/aki fic or if its gonna be hikaru/akari. if its the latter one i apologize but i dont think i would be interested in reading any more of this fic. as interesting as this might be, hika/akari kinda grosses me out too much.

GAH! WHY'D HIKARU DO THAT? Ah... I like your story! The superhero idea is great! ~ Please update soon!

is sai bad or good?ur last sentence seems to me that sai is going to make them into lab rats...

Very nice story so far; I look forward to reading more. I can't really say much about things yet- it's barely started, after all -but I'm very interested in seeing what will happen next.

O, I like it want to read more.

Hahaha, your intro was amusing. -

Cute story! Keep up the good work. You're writing well. (: