love love love it ! amazing stuff! 6

Wow, such a beautifully written story. I know I often say this to authors in reviews, but it is very refreshing to not only read something that is spaced and grammatically correct, but that also has a good plot with minimal to no OOC-ness. I liked how you wasted no time in Hiro and K being frisky with one another in Chapter 1. It's rare anymore that a fanfic can make me squeal like a goofy fangirl, but your story definitely made me do so more than once. :)

And I like that there seemed to be actual expressions of love between Hiro and K, rather than strictly lust. And that it wasn't sex every other paragraph, but some things going on between each encounter. In addition, I like how this story could stand well on its own...as in no cliffhanger, but still a sequel. Don't get me wrong, I love cliffhangers, but I also appreciate and admire a continuing story that could easily be the end by itself.

There's really nothing I could suggest as far as edits or improvements since I think you wrote this very, very well. So many kinky moments, so many sweet moments, and so many funny moments. That's practically the ideal story trifecta, especially for Gravitation fanfiction. I look forward to reading the sequels. :)

OMG ITS YOU XD I love your story and i read it when it was back on GURABITESHIYON, omg im so happy your back yay XD please updat soon this is my fav gravitation fanfic of all time XD

God, I love this! It was just what I was looking for, I'm so glad you gave your story a chance and edited it and published it here! I didn't read the original, but I'm sure it was good, because this is SUPERB! I don't know when I'm going to be able to finish reading, so I'm leaving you this now that I can just to let you know that I'll worship you from now on~ 3. I love your Hiro, K, everybody is so IC I totally melted.

Thank you so much for the lovely reading, you rock!

P.S.: To fulfill your ego a bit further, I tell you that a friend of mine stayed 'til 5 am reading this XD she couldn't stop! (and neither can I).

Well it's taken me roughly three days to read this enitre Fic and i have a few words for you...ABSOLUTLEY FRIGGIN AMAZING! i love this and it's a wonderfull story and there's a part 2 you say...*grins maniacly*

Oh my god, it made me so happy to see that this story is taking place in toronto! I live close to there, but closer to lake simcoe! Its very rare when I see that so it made my day! I dont know how old this story is but i wanted to tell you that...

I love it the whole story very great

I really, really loved it! I love this pairing. In my fic in portuguese there's K and Hiro too, and then I came here in the english section and what I've found? A wonderful piece of my favourite couple ever! Can you tell me what's the other site you posted this?

But... I really, really liked it!

OMG lol so cute... I envy them. Looking forward to next bit! :)

oh lemon!

I just love it when you let Hiro be on top... so hot! This one especially... I'm gonna go reread it n amount of times now. -

That was so extra SWEET and ROMANTIC!

i just love this pair so much they're just so cute/hot!

I loved every minute of reading your fic it was wonderful!

This was a very well written fic, the plot was amazing, the fluff was great too! Loved the funny parts too like the spin the bottle, the teasing and all that.

I'm off to read part 2 now just don't know if I still got time right now...but i will definetly read it!

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WOW! that was...

I don't know but it was really good i just fee so sorry for them both!

KYA! no K come back! you stupid big idiot! this is why your never so suppose to eveasdrop you never know if you heard right! baka! Poor hiro he doesn't have a clue as to why K's like this, but hey at least this proves K really does love even though he hasn't said anything...

I'm loving this story gotta finished reading before my brother takes the laptop away!

aww they're so sweet! and i love the fact that you made yuki and ryuichi be the firsts to find out!

they kept getting interrupted! poor them

Yuki knows Hiro's secret!

why does Kuma love Hiro? was it a random Ryu thing?

why didn't K say i love you back?

loved the ending! hilarious!