Hmm-

Nice premise, I'm only wondering how on earth Raito will get out of it!

I did feel that the kiss was a little unprecedented and unexplained, and Ryuuzaki's comment about rashness didn't exactly fit to me (Basically, why does he say "Yes"?), but I loved the idea that Ryuuzaki would choose a private confrontation, and honestly I liked that you gave Ryuuzaki a little more credit in terms of figuring out what actually happened there.

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intresting idea