| Reviews for Patrimony |
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  Llorolalluvia chapter 20 . 7/20 Aww what a sweet story! Such a beautiful ending, with Severus as a proud father. Thank you so much for writing it! |
| Llorolalluvia chapter 18 . 7/20 Omg he's so confused! Lolol! I can't imagine how hard it must have been for Hermione to walk away |
| Llorolalluvia chapter 17 . 7/20 Oh my God he is so in denial |
| Llorolalluvia chapter 16 . 7/19 Omg he adores his daughter I love that he wanted to catch her and hold her first |
| Llorolalluvia chapter 15 . 7/19 OH WOW! He endured the agony of childbirth with her! Boy, if that isn't love! |
| Llorolalluvia chapter 14 . 7/19 Aww they love each other and he doesn't know it yet! Ugh what a silly man. Also hilarious that he still calls her miss Granger lol. I loved the bit about him hovering over her like a bird of prey. It's so funny the way you describe him every now and then in this cartoonish, silly way |
| Llorolalluvia chapter 11 . 7/19 SHE'S GOING TO GO LIVE WITH HIM! |
| Llorolalluvia chapter 10 . 7/19 OMG YAY! I love that he came to help her and did the test himself and they had sex anyway! He doesn't know how deep he's in! |
| Llorolalluvia chapter 6 . 7/19 HOLY. SHIT. That was some amazing smut! I was completely absorbed and thrown totally over the edge. You really are a talented writer. |
| Llorolalluvia chapter 4 . 7/19 OMG this is such a cleverly written chapter! It's all tidy and formal but it hints so pointedly at the arguments they must have had during negotiations. And it's all SO TYPICAL of both of them. I love that Snape is so totally definitely not going to be involved in the kid's life... YEAH RIGHT |
| Llorolalluvia chapter 3 . 7/19 This is fantastic! I feel like I may have read this years ago, but my memory sucks and I'm SURE enjoying it this go 'round. The whole premise is tantalizing but your characters are perfectly written and your story is even FUNNY. A couple of times I've actually laughed out loud! |
| Llorolalluvia chapter 2 . 7/19 OH MY GOODNESS this is already so hot! She has him flustered already! I'm so excited to see where this goes! |
 Kristafied chapter 20 . 3/19 As always, so, so lovely. |
| Guest chapter 20 . 2/24 Wow just reread this story from start to finish and I can’t believe it’s only 23k long! You packed quite a story in those words. So poignant. And funny too. I love your rendering of Hermione and Severus. |
| tudorwench chapter 15 . 11/4/2019 I think that Severus riding out her contractions with her, showing her how he dealt with the pain all those years and using it to help her through the birth experience she wanted is one of the most amazingly intimate and beautiful acts of love I've read I my life. |
