Reviews for The deal
SouthernGals chapter 19 . 9/7/2019
Grammar is horrible! Needs a lot of work. And Sakura is a stupid bitch.
Field of Spring chapter 26 . 11/20/2017
I think the bond between Sasuke and Naruto is just as strong as the one between Naruto and Sakura, if not stronger (but since this fic was written a while before the manga ended, I would just take it as it is
Larisha Nara chapter 37 . 7/22/2017
I ABSOLUTELY LOOOOOOOVED AND GOD BLESS.
Daffodil chapter 3 . 9/16/2016
this is cheesy super cheesy, I really find it quite uncomfortable, but I knew Sasuke is a man w/ a few words, like specifically he could only utter a maximum of 1,000 words per year, haha... and he's well aloof and prideful, but Sasuke here is so OOC, I prefer the mild still Sasuke honestly, however I enjoyed the plot,,, So thumbs uP!
OptimusPrimegirl213 chapter 1 . 4/13/2016
Wow love this so very much Sexy too
YouSureBoutThat chapter 1 . 7/26/2015
Heeeyyyy! This story isn't bad and the characters aren't very OOC, but I would really suggest getting a beta or editor to fix your grammar mistakes. Thanks!
xFlipJamsx chapter 37 . 7/19/2015
i love the story :D but im just wondering something has sakura and her mother's relationship been resolved? :o or is it still the same and only talks to her father?
ElevatedJewel chapter 37 . 8/2/2014
I really enjoyed this story and I liked the adoption element of it
kuppincakes chapter 37 . 2/5/2014
Amazzzzinggg jobbb 3 Loved the story :)
NuraHikari chapter 37 . 9/15/2013
Love the story. Good job
NuraHikari chapter 8 . 9/15/2013
Sakura's mother is such a B*tch. She really is a horrible mother. Tsunade is right to be on sakuras side.
Love the story :)
NuraHikari chapter 4 . 9/15/2013
Wow people can be so harsh. It's non of their business anyway. :D
NuraHikari chapter 1 . 9/15/2013
I already love the beginning of the story :)
J4james chapter 37 . 1/5/2013
:D so awesome... What Jutsu where they learning I wanna know! XD
Starwood93 chapter 37 . 12/21/2012
This story was very good. It did have a few grammar errors, but was well written. I look forward to seeing more of your work!
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