One thing I believe you have against canon is that (based on their wands) James was best in the Transfiguration and Liliy in Charms (just opposite of what you wrote).

Why are you making it so all the bad people get a way with it?
I was really enjoying this story up until this point.

Ugh , Missy's a stupid ass

You really need to get a dictionary and proofread for missing words

I read petunia takes charges despite the spelling errors and missing words. Normally I stop reading when an author has those problems, but I really liked your plot so I continued to this story hoping that you would take your readers advice and get a beta, or at least a dictionary. Sadly you did neither. It really does take away from enjoying the story. Sorry I just cannot finish.

It appears you have a bad case of MarySueitis.

Very good story.
Thanks for writing.
I enjoyed reading it!

You need a little help on some of your mistakes.

trail/trial
quite/quiet
there/their/they're
These words are NOT interchangeable. Each one has its own meaning. you use them as if they were equally correct.

The errors are small, but you should learn which is the proper word to use.

Bored not board

LUNA IS IN RAVENCLAW! Y'ALL GRYFFINDOR'S STEAL EVERYTHING.

The end?
Ugh!

Will Severus get together with Petunia?
Severus might Apprentice Dudley?

Can Harry adjust to having parents? How will the Potters react to hearing about Harry's "adventures"?

Can Lucius function as a Squib for 10 years?

Will the Malfoy Estate and vaults be released to Narcissa? She never took Voldemort's mark which shows character especially since this Daughter of the renowned House of Black was known to be not only sane, beautiful, cultured, and wealthy but also magically powerful, intellectually gifted, and Slytherin-clever (e.g., potential Unspeakable) so Voldemort would have wanted to mark her.

Who gets punished for this "cluster¥uck"?
The DEs are all released, Dumbles retires, Voldie dies, ... So, who will carry the blame so that Britain's magical society can heal and hopefully free itself from stagnation.

Could the muggle parents pool enough money to buy a "Muggle" or "Muggleborn" seat on the Wizegamott?

And the Muggle Parents as well as the Muggleborn need a seat (read 'Voice') in the School Board.

A good chapter, but needs a little proofreading. So Delores' resentment leads her to do exactly the wrong thing.

This is the first comment I have made on all the stories I have read-here and on other collections.

For the most part I like the stories and the different takes on the characters.

HOWEVER: I do not like the bad English. Does anyone use proofreaders? Also

the stories that stop before they are finished-anyone thought of collaborators. I read several authors that have turned over their stories to people who think along the same lines they so and have turned over the continuation of their story lines. Marcus

Wonder if Narcissa would have felt better about rubbing shoulders with so many muggles & there muggle-loving friends if some of thoese muggles were well-to-do (aristrocrats) in the muggle world if that might have softened her up a little? As for Narcissa having to spend time on holiday with them & her two children in order to secure a future for them & herself but alo her husband Lucius freedom from being sentenced to azkaban!

Just how will or more importantly will Lucius take his son Draco to task for his bratty
behaviour...and will Lucius be able to reconnect with his daughter Erin? Who will take
charge of Hogwarts if they do decide to reopen...and jus what has happened to Severus
Snape? Hermione's sister seems to be well set to offering friendship during this trip to
Draco except that he couldn't ignore the fact that she's muggleborn?

If Voldemort has effectively inprisoned Albus within his own mind whilst he makes free use
of his body to try & destroy everything good around him whilst disguised as Albus Dumbledore...but if Voldemort has done so then would he also know that Severus was a spy
for the Order & Dumbledore within Voldemort's ranks or had the information been hidden from Voldemort?

I think it looks like Albus is going to need a little help from outside his own mind in
order to achieve in what looks like the impossible in regaining control of his own body &
soul...or at the very least something to distract Voldemort's so badly to give Albus the
necessary chance?

Hmm...guess Albus has obviously gone & done something momumentally stupid in regards to that diary of Tom Riddle along with not telling anyone else what he planned to do just because he thought he knew best...hmm...guess he's a right dunderhead!

It will interesting to see just how long Gilderoy Lockhart actually manages to remain at
Hogwarts before a responsible person actually does something about his shody teaching
methods & actual lack of ability as DADA Professor let alone as a wizard? How pleased will
Neville be learn exactly why his frog "Trevor" keeps trying to escape if/and when Harry
tells him...what other animals can Harry talk to? Wonder just how old Lucius Malfoy
took the news Erin Malfoy got sorted into Gryffindor & has become friends with Ginny
Weasley? Perhaps with Albus so heavily involved in trying to keep his soul that Severus
can finally get down to doing what he does best trying to teach the little snots potions? Perhaps if Severus had an apprentice to teach the lower years so that he only had to teach
those after OWLS he'd be in better frame of mind,I wonder? Just who was trying to pick
away at Harry's natural occulumency shields was it Albus, Gilderoy (haha!) or was it Severus? Really can't wait to see just what will happen to poor...poor Umbridge, hehe?

This story looks well set to be as brilliant as the first part of the series "Petunia
Takes Charge"...