| Reviews for She's Leaving Home |
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Trixery chapter 17 . 12/18/2017 nooooo kakashi,,,, sakura you are meant to be together! dont stop seeing each other so often |
alexmalagon chapter 17 . 12/9/2017 Loved it keep it up:) |
mizzanimequeen chapter 17 . 4/24/2017 I definitely like the pace of things. It isn't super quick like a lot of other fics where they meet then bang th next day. Of course, it is a bit ooc but it's cute reading Kakashi confessing to Sakura first. Hopefully this whole thing with Orochimaru blows over so t could be a happy ending but do we eventually get to find out what really happened with Tsunade? Anyways, definitely enjoying the story, keep up the good work and I'm excited for more. |
Green Eyed Girl chapter 17 . 4/12/2017 I'm looking forward for the next chapter. Please update soon. Thx :) |
eeearnest chapter 17 . 4/11/2017 3 love love love. You do an excellent job here. I read the whole thing all in one go so here are a few things I've noticed. (Some have nothing to do with story ;)) You're constantly apologizing to us the reader. Stop ittttt. You're writing a fanfic because you had an idea. Changing it because it's not what some butthole wants isn't going to make you feel better. Just do what makes you feel like you're following the idea to the best of your ability. I really feel like you've captures what college is like. It moves quickly. Very quickly. But there's also one thing id like to say (currently in college myself) I've only had closer relationships with my teachers like this if they were in my major. And man teachers are way harder to talk to. I think maybe a little more interaction between Sakura and Tsunade would be good, as she is her faculty advisor. Also student teacher relationships aren't usually something the other faculty members stick their noses is, but hey this world works differently so do what you think is best also with Tsunade being gone, who will Sakura go to for enrolling for the next semester? I'm anxious to see how you play this out. I do think Kakashi is slightly OOC and that they might have less inhibitions than normal people (like your characters are incredibly honest with each other ) if it were me, I'd have them bottle it up for a bit (entirely unhealthy but for dramas sake) and when it all gets out it's like oh my goodness I can't believe you! They fight the staff is rife with angst and they get back together when everyone sees how good they were for each other. But that's a different story line than what you're probably writing so don't pay attention to that. I wish you the best of luck! Be motivated! Write the thing! We love you! BTW I'm always here if you need someone to bounce ideas off of or for just support in general. :) Hope you have a great day! |
Guest chapter 16 . 3/27/2017 More kakashi x sakura please! |
Tessela chapter 1 . 3/18/2017 I really hope to see you update soon, I was really getting into the story and I find it really interesting. I love the scenes between Sakura and Kakashi- they are so cute. I also fear for him and his job and I fear for Sakura and the bullying she's gonna endure from everyone judging her character, her parents when they find out and just overall with the situation with Orochimaru. I hope you won't update like 5 years from now lmfao that would royally suck. |
Alpacasso chapter 15 . 3/14/2017 I love this story so much! I stayed up all night reading it, and I'm amazed at how well written this story is. I hope you continue to update it, I don't know what I would if I didn't find out what is going happen ;) 3 Keep writing! This story is amazing! ~Alpacasso |
XxTaintedxDaggerxX chapter 15 . 3/12/2017 Can't wait to read what you have instore for us readers next. |
Guest chapter 15 . 3/12/2017 I legit just read your whole fic in one afternoon amd caught up to ur latest update and i want more! I need more kakashi x sakura moments hehe .update soon please |
DaydreamingMonkey chapter 15 . 3/11/2017 Been waiting for them to finally give in to their desires! I love this story so much! This chapter is amazing. You've built their relationship up so well, that it feels rewarding as a reader to finally see them take the step from friendship into romance |
JPMarvel chapter 15 . 3/11/2017 So I haven't read this chapter yet. But I was just thinking about this story the other day and how sad I was that it was never finished cause I loved it so much. I'm so excited I can barely handle myself! I gotta reread all the previous chapters first but ah I'm so excited! |
Snowdonia Hawkweed chapter 15 . 3/11/2017 I'm happy you're updating! This story is amazing and it's been a long time. Can't wait for next chap :) |
Kakashilover12 chapter 1 . 11/13/2013 Pleaaaaasssseee continue this,try to love naruto again! ;; |
Cissipousard chapter 14 . 5/21/2013 Moooore! :DD Pleeeease write more! :D |