That was awesome! Sephirotho already mentioned this, but yeah, the grammar bit needs some work. ;; I'm sure a little practice will help!

The story was really funny; I was just reading the canon bath scenes too, and I must say, your attempt to personify Frey's character was amazing, to say the least. I liked the part when Kyle was hiding in the Lindwurm Mercenary Brigade room, getting kicked out and punished~ xD

Illusion_Sky: Yup, the prince is actually Freyjadour Falenas. (forgot the complete name though ;;)

While this story is funny, there is a HUGE problem: grammar. You use the wrong times, change them in mid-sentence etc...that makes the story very hard to read.

English isn't my first language (german is) but even I could write way better than THIS.

Dude...is the Prince's real name Frey? I keep seeing people calling the Prince Frey, but...how come they never said it in the game?

gyahahhaah!

seru bgt!

lebih asik lagi klo si frey bneran ngintip..trus ktauan...

asik asik... :D