Story is written well, but it is a bit odd that you used the word "Socialist" as a scare term. It would have made more sense to use "fascism" to describe the type of government you were describing. Socialism at its roots advocates worker control of the means of production, within the confines of the state that can mean many things, from control through a red beuracracy like in the Bolshevik Soviet Union, or a syndicalist relationship between organized labor which controls the means of production and a centralized state. However there is a whole other spectrum that we look at when we talk about libertarian socialism which is the stream of socialist philosophy that intersects with Anarchism. The central idea is decentralized communes of cooperative labor in a stateless society. In reference to ATLA the system in the Fire Nation is reminiscent of a mixture of a Monarchy and a Fascist state. In any case the society is highly capitalistic, an idea which is best presented in the episode "The Painted Lady". Another point of conflict I see between the Cannon ATLA world and your story is that the Air Nomads are a good example of an Anarcho-communist society. Therefore to make the characters fight against your strange fake "socialism" makes no sense. It is very common in the west, specifically the United States to be scared of the term socialism as for the past hundred years we have been taught the lie of the superiority of the western capitalist "democracies" to all other systems. In reality economic mobility is in unregulated capitalism is an illusion, and the "freedom" provided by capitalism only extends as far as the contents of your bank account and the color of your skin.

hace tiempo que no actualizas ! vamos sigue la historia es muy buena !1

4 years since you've updated? This story is amazing! Why aren't you continuing it?

this is great. keep writing. :)

Um…I don't know what to say.

Please continue this story! REALLY WELL WRITTEN:)

This is a really cool story

keep writing

-pengwens

please write some more chapters I really want to know whats going to happen next

please please write more chapters. i really want to know whats going to happen next

p. story is great so far

I love this story! You're really good at writing action.

Please write more. This is really good!

Wow. This is a very interesting read. I'd like for you to continue this story. The plot is very original, and keeps the reader interested and eager for more. Please update!

I'd just like to say that this was simply amazing! The story is scary, quite frankly, and I think you've portraied the characters well too! I added this to favourites! Great job! Looking forward to seeing more soon :)

Very awesome chapter! I really liked it! I thought Yoshi did die at first, I was sad, lol. Glad that they got away in time. Can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the awesome work!

This story is so amazing right now! It is very unique and really creative. I really like it! Please keep up the great work! I hope you update soon!