This story would have been better if you'd bothered to consider proper spelling and grammar.

Nice story.

Loved it and wud of loved to read about the new baby and what they had and the name too

i love this story so thank you for all of your hard work

Well I for one look forward to the squeal.

I love it. I'm happy that they have their little girl and another on the way. They went from bad to very happy.

Love both stories, you have a great way of making the resident dungeon bat into a warm and living daddy. Awesome. I also like the surprise Greek trip, they so enjoyed that initial trip I'm glad it wasn't spoiled by the miscarriage after.

I'm glad they owled Eileen, she reminds me of a feminine Sev which is always a good thing lol.

excellent story couldn’t stop reading it really did like it is sad it is over.

good story couldn’t stop reading it really did like it is sad it is over.

I totally expected twins. But I'm so glad he had and is having babies. I do have one question though...

What in the world did you do to the Malfoy's?

I liked this story. It was... Entertaining.

Hi,

In this chapter Harry sound just like a woman. it is kind of odd, but then you are the writer.

the story is very good though

:) great

aww i hope that they will be able to get preg soon though. and it would be funny to see snape pregs though harry would look adorable.