That was awesome, cute and wonderful, I loved it and nice job

Aw :3

Glad this turned into a happy, sweet story in the end. I like angst and all, but I like happy endings. And they have one, yay!

I liked the way you flipped back and forth between the characters in the first chapter. To be honest I didn't pay attention to the lyrics because I don't know the song, but they made a good spacer between scenes. It was cute and telling how they were both freaking out so much about being apart. (Funny, I am planning a story with my favorite BL couple and part of the conflict involves a girl being way too into the band boy ; Weird - must seem like a likely story.)

I do love TaixYamato love 3

The only thing I found that was odd was when Matt was sent to the O.R., but I figure you meant the E.R. I was thinking, he doesn't need an operation, just pump his stomach! All the crying scenes were sweet because it showed just how attached they are to each other, and even though it was scary when Yamato freaked out, it was nice that Tai was able to save him :D

Overall, very cute story, and I liked it very much. Kudos!

~Des

- i luvers it! it was really good...and actually this was basically as good as the first chapter cause it brought everything together...- so yeah

~Sayo-san

Oh. my god. okay dude in the begininy it say the clock was 4:35. i looked at my clock trying to be a smartass and prove what time it was...my clock said 4:35. that messed up! imma go read the story and then be bak with more hang on...Now it's 4:45 too. It's the apocolypse...Okay. That was really good! But the whole timing thing was just scary...

I love this story this is my second time reading it

That was good. Really cute. I liked the Promise Rings! And nice ending, really!