I liked how this has a very different take on why the Earl didn't kill Allen when he was younger and the poem at the end was really really good!

i want to read more...such an interesting story c:

Oh wow. This was amazing! I loved the perspective and insight you gave us of the Millennium Earl. His relationship with Allen is quite interesting and I loved that you pointed out that he didn't kill Allen to let this play of his become more interesting. Another interesting note is that the Noahs (Road, Tykki, the twins) are all curious and fascinated by Allen. The ending poem simply brought shivers running down my spine. It was done wonderfully and chillingly. Great job!

Very interesting. Fics that are from the Earl's point of view are quite rare.

I found a couple of grammatical mistakes:

"Yes, he most defiantly should have killed that child years ago"

definitely, not defiantly. Defiantly means "to do something in a defiant manner".

"he’s begging to care less and less."

Perhaps "he's beginning to care less and less"?

I enjoyed reading this. Thanks. :)

this was beautifully written! even though its suck a simple fic it was incredably captivating! i realy liked the poem at the end.

Well this was definitely a creepy but interesting fic. Loved how you wrote the Earl.

this is amazing...i have never been so captivated by such a simple fic. please keep on writing! keep it up nya!

~Lonely Kitty

That was great, and sad. The poem on the bottom was a bit odd... The rhyming scheme changed half way through.

But otherwise, it's great!

this was great! Earl is portrayed so well.

This is good :D

Nice~ I liked it..

so true just like the earl lol so true! write more often! i demand it!