Wow. Mind is blown here.

That's was cool. Wasn't quite expecting your epilog.. but I suppose there's a non-smutty way to read into it. Thanks for sharing.

Very suggestive ending, I must say.

Loved it!

The first chapter in an ongoing series of 5th/Jack adventures? One can only hope. With a beginning like this, you're certainly left wanting more.

That said, what a wonderfully wicked combination of New and Classic 'Doctor Who'. Jack, both sadly disappointed that it's the wrong Doctor, and a touch hopeful at the same time, balanced perfectly with the open, curious nature of the 5th Doctor. Put Turlough into the mix, and the mix is near perfect.

Absolutely lovely, and thank you!

cool, i like it