Very well written and hot. The Scott-Ororo coupling is intriuging and something I would like to see more of in the Ultimate universe, and the ending is very good, more realistic than any other probably would have been. Keep writing!

I liked it. Good job.

How much do I love your writing? A really great story. It's another favorite. :)

Amazing. All I can say. This is excatly how teenagers on an adrenale rush would act and behavie

I absolutely loved this! The characterizations were great and the plot was very hot. lol. The ending was so sad, you could feel all the emotions that Ororo had to be feeling. Please write a sequel!

I really love your Ultimate fics!

You're interpretation of each character was well done. The pool table thing was awesome. Jean should mind her damn business, I know that's her friend and all, but she should have gone to Scott.

Hey it was good, I really liked it, this seems like a good piece to do a companion to from the Scott's point of view. I really liked how you demonstrated Ororo's point of view and if you could get Scott's insights and thoughts in a companion piece I'd read it.