So in the beginning, no joke, I thought this was like pre-slash or something, and I was about to quit, but I read all the way through, and was honestly in tears at the end. Good for you. Excellent story.

the ending is so upsetting in a way words can't describe- just a primal sadness

Nice story. It highlighted the Jedis' attitude towards emotions, despite emotions being completely natural. Obi-Wan clearly felt the need to express his emotions discreetly. I liked your portrayal of Anakin. He was so innocent and didn't really understand all these strange new customs and rules he now had to follow. You did a great job of portraying both of them adjusting to the changes in their lives. Also, THAT LAST LINE!

And this cute, innocent, little kod became a murderer. So sad.

You should write more! This is really good! Thanks!

IT was all adorable until the last line, which this fic tried to rip my heart out. I gasped out loud, and there is pain...so, good job?

That last line reminded me what will become of them, abs who Anakin will become, and it made me want to cry. Great job. The story was funny; I actually laughed at a few parts. And the ending was beautiful

THAT LAST LINE

Well last sentence was rude xccc
I'm here for fluff and stuff not heart break

Such a peaceful pocket of time that was. Amazing job! :)

So cute! Innocent Anakin and Grieving Obiwan.
SCREAMS AT THE LAST LINE

That last sentence was like a sucker punch in the gut. Oh, you're good, you. The innocence was deceiving.

wow thanks for breaking my heart at that last line

:D

Anakin's so cute as a kid

A nice look at the differences between Anakin and Obi-Wan and how they might start to deal with them. And just when you think it's all going to be OK, along comes that chilling last line.

By the way, thank you for that image of Obi-Wan doing one-handed push-ups before breakfast! I'm just going to sit here and think about that for a while :)