This fic is fascinating, please update soon!

This story keeps getting better. I totally agree with Bones. I don't see the attraction of Brad Pitt as a guy or an actor. Good chapter - had me engrossed.

i like how you juxtapose the cute moments between b&b with the creepy monologue from the killer... very cool!

Great chapter! I'm so with Bones on this one, I don't see the attraction to Brad Pitt either! My friends go ooh, he's so cute, and I shudder, and ask how they could think that. I also agree that Morgan Freedman is a good actor, I like his stuff. Wonderful chapter! I like the interaction between Bones and Booth! I can't wait to read more!

Great chapter! I really enjoyed it! I thought that the first body had an "S" on it? I like this story! Is this Paul guy going to turn out to be a bad guy?

This chapter was excellent. Very true to the show. The perp's thoughts were very creepy.

Great chapter! Bones seems tense!

This was cute!

I love how you have started this piece. I often think, both on the show and in fanfics, that Brennan is portrayed as too perfect with the exception of her familiar flaws. You, however, have hit on a flaw that afflicts all writers. I'm looking forward to reading how you work Brennan around her block.

You should be just a bit more careful in editing yourself. Nothing very major - a couple of typos and some run-on sentences. Here's one: He would arrive and stand, watching here and it was the most annoying thing that anyone could do.

Excellent start. I have put this piece on alert and look forward to reading more.