Reviews for Wish
YessCristopher chapter 30 . 5/20
I just found this story and I love it, It'll be great if you continue with another update :D thanks for sharing it
Guest chapter 30 . 5/18
OK I LOVE YOUR FIC SOOOO MUCH!

Like there are /actual/ consequences to messing up the storyline (actually pretty rare for like actual consequences to occur in most time travel fics I've read, sadly), and the arcs have been really interesting!

I love how this is a slow burn romance because really, two 11 year olds kissing two weeks after they're introduced is just... MMM ok then but surprisingly common in most time travel fics I've read. I'm exaggerating a bit but I think you get my point ;)

I also LOVE your creativity with how her saving that chunin team Hayate led to all the stuff the characters had to deal with on that mission.

And I was so scared during these last two chapters for Naruto and Sasuke! AHH I knew intellectually they couldn't die bc pfft plot armor amiright but... well I definitely related to Itachi kicking those two dropouts' butts.

I feel so bad for Hana, unrequited love/crushing is rough. Especially when you have SAKURA FREAKIN HARUNO as your "love rival" because we all know Sakura's an actual badass.

I love your depiction of Itachi. Your pacing is wonderful in Itachi and Sakura's relationship. I can totally see them teasing each other. I'm glad they've gotten over where Sakura almost killed Itachi (not that he knew... but irrelevant).

I can't wait for when lil Itachi starts crushing. I wonder how Sakura will react? Will she remain oblivious, as in most fanfics? Not that there's anything wrong with that, just a bit cliche. But I totally get that well-paced romance is friggin HARD to write just at all, even harder when one isn't oblivious as Adrien. Was that a Miraculous reference? Yes, yes it was. Will Sakura start crushing first, not our beloved little Ita-chan? But I'm betting my money on Itachi, he was blushing for pete's sake! Sakura just seems too focused on the whole saving-Sasuke/the future team 7-thing.

One thing I'm curious about is when we'll see little Sakura. If she even exists. If she does, when someone (probs Itachi, she's always with him) figures it out. It's not that hard to figure out either, I would have expected that someone of her reputation around the village would have been suspected of at least SOME sort of connection.

Also.. this is kind of minor, but did Sakura ever end up cutting her hair? Did I skip over it? I hope not, this is a monster of a fic. I've been binge-reading it over yesterday and today.

Wow I haven't ever written a review that long. Ummm... enjoy? Thank you for being awesome and providing such beautiful (free!) literature!
Guest chapter 30 . 5/18
I wonder when Sakura will get the Byakugou
Guest chapter 28 . 5/18
haha loved the author's note ;)
Guest chapter 27 . 5/18
aw poor Mikoto, I was kind of annoyed that she was prejudiced against Naruto at first but then I can kind of understand since you gave that description of what she was feeling. I still don't think she would hold any animosity towards him specifically, as she was shown looking at him sadly at least in the anime, but I do see your point of view.
Guest chapter 24 . 5/18
aw poor baby hana
Guest chapter 13 . 5/17
Hahahahhaaha omgosh itachi why
Guest chapter 12 . 5/17
Haha itachi’s rationalizing his pettiness... lol
Curclark chapter 24 . 2/19
The last few chapters have really been disappointing. I was enjoying all the humor from Itachi and Sakura but there was been no development between the two in many chapters. This isn't my first time reading this fic so I apologize if i've already made this complaint in the past
Yu chapter 30 . 2/13
Where is the update?
Omg please update soon, i really love this fic!
nyctophilia chapter 30 . 2/1
Dammit I thought Sakura was the one who would get distracted and then beat their asses. Please update soon though, Author-Sama.
nyctophilia chapter 25 . 2/1
Oh my god I love them oh my god yes nardo and Sausage besties oh my gOd.
AssassinShroudedInDarkness chapter 30 . 10/15/2019
Love it!
Angie2002-01 chapter 30 . 9/3/2019
I loved it! I hope u update soon one day!
Angie2002-01 chapter 27 . 9/3/2019
Please don’t tell me Ino and Sasuke end up together. I know this is ItaSaku so Sasuke won’t be with Sakura but since they won’t be together i won’t accept anyone else to be with Sasuke! And most definitely not Ino! (Or Hinata and Karin cuz ew) so please Sasuke needs to stay single! SasuSaku is my OTP but I accept pretty much everyone with Sakura just not Sasuke cuz I believe no one will ever love him as much as she does and frankly he doesn’t deserve to be with anyone and Sakura deserves better butttt Sakura loves him and I forgive Sasuke!
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