very, very nice. An insightful exploration to the suffering of uncertain exile, done with unexplored characters. Would recommend to others.

Beautifful. Rare piece of work of a rare character.

Deep very deep this is the kind of One Piece story there should be more of.

wow, this is one captivating one-shot

made me think a lot of Sartre's writing theme

and the characterization was spot-on and with characters we so rarely get to read about - thank you

- great work! I am sure Shura 'flew' safely to land ;)

He's my favorite, too. Thank you for letting him survive Wiper. And hey, if Gedatsu can survive the fall from Skypiea, then Shura sure as Hell can too. And one can only hope that Ohm and Satori followed him eventually. :)

I like thi one a lot! but the ending qoute "may god be with you all the way...Shura which one of the pther priests said that? This question is maily out of curiosity but oyu did a wonderful job of writing this one-shot!