First person perspective uses I
When Light refers to himself as 'Light-kun', he is using third person...

um...illegal...

I like how you added lyrica to the end.I love that song.

I THIS STORY!

Sequel here I come!~ 8DDDDD

I love your epilogue. L says that he likes his "eye-candy" to be dressed nice, but I think that L looks good no matter what he wears. I love the reaction that L, Mello, and Matt have at seeing that Light and Near have become fast friends. Very funny. I would love to see you write a sequel to this story. Part of it would be at Wammy's. I always love stories when L and Light visit the terrible trio. The story then could go to L and Light going to New York. Hint. Hint. I loved your story!

I just realized that I had not reviewed this chapter. I think that it is so funny how much alike Yuki and L are, and that Light points it out to L. The watch/tracer that L put on Light was very clever. I like that L mentions to Light that he is the only one who can remove it. I love how L reveals his true name to Light. Light certainly has his wedding to L all planned out. Now I am wondering if they will actually get married. I love this story.

I applaud your very clever ideas on how L and the rest of the taskforce captured "Kira" and spared Misa and Light. This is how we truly would have loved the series to ended.

Not sure if L and Light have done the deed. I did check out the Soap Box Company. They are amazing.

I am sure that I speak for most of us when I say that I would absolutely love to see L and Light posing in men's clothing ads. Sigh...

I am sure that a lot of us would love to have seen L with his head on Light's shoulder while Light played the piano. This was such a sweet scene. L proves that he has a gentle and considerate side when he takes Light to his room to play the piano.

It certainly looks as if L has met his match in Takada. I love how L whispers to Light that Takada might be the devil!

Poor Light! He is surrounded by three slightly insane persons. And L! You naughty, naughty boy!

I have to admit that I had to look up the meaning of Metrosexual. Misa is definitely in a state of denial.

Oh, man! Just when it was getting real fun, Misa had to come in and spoil it. Light is certainly not thinking logically when he is considering suing the newspaper for printing that he and Misa were engaged. If he does so, this is only going to convince people that he might be gay.

I love how relaxed L is around Light. He even goes so far as to lay down on Light's bed. Light is so engrossed in reading the magazine that he hasn't gotten uptight about L being so close to him. It appears that L is enjoying this way too much. I know that I am.