no, sakura? Sakura? why, she doesn't understand sasuke like naruto does, even if he's dense, naruto still on a subconsious level understand sasuke, and make sure sasuke doesn't lose his humanity. sakura is a push over when it comes to sasuke, she would probably let him get away with murder if she could justify it, not saying she's a bad character, but her personality just doesn't fit sasu's.

Aw! This was really cute! I don't usually read Sasu/Saku but I really liked this one! Great work!

This is a lot less subtle than the rest of your fictions, I suppose, but it's justified because you're trying to impersonate Sakura's one-track mind.

I like the way you made Sasuke her obsession and Naruto more of a side character...who was only mentioned for a couple of paragraphs.

Good work~!

This story doesn't have an ending.

Otherwise, good

Lol I like! XD I loved the way you've written Sakura here, very in character and the bit about her betaing up his bodyguards was just hilarious XD. I adroed the ending' perfect 'aww' moment _

Hey... the story is nice.. it is much better if you're going to continue the story... it felt like you left a cliff hanger.. anyways, good job!

I felt that their relationship was more like friendship than romance, ya' know (at least, in Sasu's case). But you're still more or less foreign with this pairing, so it's okay. You will come to make it more, uh, love-ish with time.

SakuSasu is not my favorite pairing. In fact, at one point, it used to be the pairing I hated most. But this was cute. Hehehe, Sakura as Sasuke's bodyguard is simply win~! xD

I really enjoyed how this story expresses Sasuke and Sakura's relationship. It's not too lovey-dovey, but it's not cold to the point where Sakura is with an unresponsive ice block. It's very realistic.

I'm impressed that you're not a fan of this pairing, but you still wrote a great piece. Takes a lot of talent to do that. ;D

Sasuke and Sakura are so addictive! haha. I used to hate them, and then after reading a fanfic or two, I was HOOKED. (And yes, Honey Canon is AMAZING.

it was very cute. i hope you continue it and sasuke and sakura are my favorite pair togehter. i thought you wrote them rather well.