too cute!

I don't want you to spork my face off, but I was going to review anyways. It was very well done and it's an actual problem that not only ANIME characters can have. I've had that problem multiple times. I'm having a case of Goldilocks (minus the bears as well) tight now in fact

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWW WW! I wish I was Winry! and btw, sporks are not for eating...they are a wepon, not a toy!

aww its so sweet. i love your fics :D

This was very sweet, I really liked it.

Loved Ed's reaction: "I'll sleep...however I want to."

While I tend to see my face as merely mediocre, I do like it enough to not want it eaten off with a spork. So here's your review.

That was, frankly, adorable. Only word that fits. Also, I liked your imagery. ]

heheh! omg! this is so good! i share winrys pain! i'm reviewing this at 3 in my state heheh

the name goldilocks was so smart and creative!

There should totally be a chapter 2 with eds reaction when he wakes up

D'aw you just seem to have the most heart-warming, adorable Ed/Win Fics !

I enjoyed how much I could actually relate to Winry in this. I've actually gone through a few bipolar summer nights myself. It's hot when you're trying to sleep, you wake up a while later and suddenly it's cold. !ezz.

Heheh, anyways, I especially loved how you portrayed Edward sleeping. That was just too cute. xD

Well I'm off to bed. Let's see if I have any trouble sleeping. Sadly enough, I won't have an Edward to sleep with I some how cannot. :(

Yvette.

Now, now, put the spork down...

This was sweet and I liked it a lot. I bet Al was in the corner, watching the whole thing happen. XD

Something to watch out for: when you transition from dialogue into the context of who said it, you don't need to capitalize the first letter. It's the same sentence.

For instance...

"This room is too hot!" She huffed.

This should be...

"This room is too hot!" she huffed.

Great story! I'll see ya later,

Ami

Sporks...they angry me. So I review for ju )

I love your work, your writing style, and what you write about.

hehe adorable! loved it! very cute!

*giggle* "i like this dream" XD

perfect fic 3loved it :D

-ducks behind a wall so she won't get eaten with a spork-

-peeks out from behind the corner- Uhm, heh, very good! Really enjoyed it, and I like how you compared it, if only slightly, to Goldilocks and the Three Bears, especially with the "this is just right." _ Kawaii in all ways possible. 3 So, anywho, nice job. CX Keep up the good work?

aw this was a cute story. i really like the goldilocks background. i wonder if the smile on my face is permanent.

well, in the story goldilocks, i think goldilocks was finding the right porridge, chair and bed for her...but this story being an edxwin fanfic, plus it's yours, well...i shouldn't start an argument about you using a room instead...but it's very creative...i can give you that...

it's a good reading material...i really enjoyed it! great job on this!