Sorry to say this but as a proper Dane I feel a little offended... The reason for this you might ask? I'll tell you, the story of 'The Little Mermaid' (along with other well known fairy tales such as 'The Ugly Duckling') DOES NOT belong to Disney. it was originally written by 'H. C. Andersen' a long dead Danish fairy tale writer.

On a brighter note I really recomment you read the original story it's a lot "darker" (if you can call it that) than the Disney version I mean instead of getting her voice 'borrowed' she gets her tunge cut off so yeah... But it IS a fairy tale so it isn't really discribed much *read 'at all'*

And please do not take this as critisism 'cause it's not.

Sooo anyways HAVE A NICE DAY! and good luck with writing your stories! XP

MOOOOORRRRRREEE!

Beautifully written! Beauty and the Beast (or Ghost in this case) is my favorite fairy tale!

heya shadow from toonsur. its the real me . mwahahahahahah !

i just wanted to tell you how awsome this story is and to get a move on with the ones coming soon cause the summary's on your homepage rock !

your truely,

SamManson14

( and yes this is my toonsurfer account name too. )

Awsome story. Now will u pls pls PLS get started on you Beauty and the Beast story. It's my all time fav fairy tale

lol very original story ! i love it :) I think it's a great parallel you've done here

Really neat. I enjoyed each story and you wrapped 'em together in a deluxe package! ;). My favorite fairytale is beauty and the beast and I would be excited if you were to write it.

Thanks,

~Molly~

You killed Vlad! Boo!

WOW! I loved this chapter. Quite possibly one of the better (OK best) fairy tale spinoffs of Danny Phantom I've ever seen.

I am now going to ask you a lot of questions. ?Fine mabie not an extraneous ammount but they may seem odd.

1) What other collections do you have?

2) If you do have others what publisher and year are they from?

3) If you don't have any other collections what stories have you heard through word of mouth?

4) Which version of Grimm's is it?

Time for some claification on the weird questions. I am a Fairy Tale collector. I have a nice and large sellection of just about every single nursery rhyme, fairy tale, myth, and extraneous folklore that anyone can come up with. I kinda would like to take up the offer proposed at the begining of the chapter to suggest the next tale to be told, and I want to make sure that I choose one that you have a copy of. Otherwise I'll end up practicaly writing it. I really don't want that as it would ruin the story.

Thanks for reading through this review, and please reply, even if you don't want to answer the questions.

RFYS (Read From You Soon)

Pterodactyl

you might want to make it a tad shorter, also it was kinda boring, escept for the beggining and end parts.

This was written so beautifully! Very great description, and very nice character descriptions! Great work! :) Do you know which fairytale you are going to write next? (It would be pretty funny and amusing to see a DP version of Aladdin, with Tucker as Aladdin, and Jazz as Jasmine, but that might not work. *shrug*) Can't wait to read more!