Amazing i really like it I am glad use Natalia AND Eric instead of Wolfe

I loved the story- for your next one I recommend putting eric and Natalia together again- they're awesome together

wooow.

its all about nick..

Out of all the fanfics I've read to do with Nick and Natalia, this is the best one, as its probably the most realistic and is written really well. I know you wrote this ages ago, but I thought I'd review it now as I'm reading it, and you deserve to know that your stories are good. :P

This story was GREAT! I loved it! Especially the detail that you put into what Nick did to Natalia and [of course] the EdeN moments!

I really enjoyed this fanfic. . .I only wish there was more Natalia centric fanfics out there!

The story was awesome.

It was great. I don't know what else to say. I loved it.

You should continue writing. I know you're finished with this story, but you should write more Natalia stories.

Honestly? I can't find anything for you to improve on. I LOVE this fic. The plot is great, the Natalia/Calleigh friendship and Eric/Natalia fluff is incredible, and your writing is amazing - you're an insanely talented writer.

Love, love, love this. I can't wait for the next chapter! :]

Great chapter! You should seriously consider joining the Garden of EDeN C2 Community.

Interesting. I like the exploration of Natalia's abuse. I've always wished that would go more into that on the show (not because in any way I like characters being abused, its a terrible situation) but because I think it makes her character interesting and fascinating and I've always been sorry they always glossed over this. (also, damnit, i know better than to read work in progress stories, I HATE cliffhangers! I need to know how it ends!) But i love teh friendship between Calleigh and Nat here.

This is a great story! Please update soon. You should really join the Garden of EDeN C2 Community.

great stroy so far..

hope you make many stories of Natalia

she is my favorite charcter D

it's getting very interesting )

great job

im lovin it

Nicely written. I hope Calleigh and Natalia become best friends. I hope that Natalia and Eric get together. It would be a nice change from the Calleigh/Eric pairings. I hope they find Nick, but not before Eric finds him first and punch his daylights out.

Eric won't get in trouble because Nick provoked him first. Yeah. lol, I laugh at myself.

Great job.