that was a nice story. i really enjoyed reading it. thanks for writing.

Love, love, love this! Great plot, and you really caught the essence of the characters, especially Luke. I loved how his and Mara's relationship progressed. I would love to see another Star Wars (Luke/Mara!) fic if the muse and time made it possible. Thanks so much for the gift of being able to read this. I'm sad that it's done,

Very glad I found this story it’s great!

This is a good story that deserves more attention. Thank you for writing it all up and posting it. I love reading Mara stories, and this is one of the better ones I've found on the site so far. If you ever feel like it some day, many of us would like another Mara tale, where she and Luke meet a little earlier. It would be a very fun journey.

For a man suffocation and more. he did a whole lot of exposition

Really bored with the way you knocked the fun out of the love triangle so soon. Leaving that to Han and Leia on Endor still seems to be the best way of sealing them. Now it would make things just kind of bleh

Luke mentions not knowing his father's real name. Which is false

Excellent chapter! The scene with Camie and Fixer was really well done and from a perspective I have never seen before. It makes so much sense that the Empire would have questioned all the neighbors once they learned Luke's identity and that some of the neighbors might have resented it. The development of the relationship between Luke and Mara was handled well too.

This is a beautiful story and was a true pleasure to read. Thank you for writing it.

interesting au story, Mara is my fav character , i liked the way she changed after meeting Luke early , even if she was sent as a spy , she fell quickly for him.
And about her being pregnant early , i think that she will have a girl .

A nice little break from my incursion into the heart of Harry Potter fanfictions.

Oooh very good taunt from Luke about Leia, and how the revelation may have affected Vader's turnabout
Appreciate Vader's thoughts about what would have happened if Padme had not died then, something I have not seen before, and great pre-mortem one-liner. Also very good to have Vader outline why his relationship led to the Dark Side

Good description of Palpatine's appearance and the affect, and also the insight into his fear

Surprisingly interesting conversation, really started getting intense when Vader heard Mara was to kill Luke
Ooh, never thought of the idea of Vader's reaction to almost killing Luke. Also liked his thoughts on Mara and being a Sith
Very emotional conversation between Luke and Mara

I seriously appreciate Luke's thoughts here, emphasizing why he has to leave the others (and be a distraction), and why he thinks that Vader can be saved. Necessary
Nice touch that Leia's diplomatic backing would be right in line with the Jedi code, something that tends to be overlooked
Wow, real conflicted conversation with Mara. Was almost sure she would stay with Solo and Co.
Good expanded talk with Vader