This was done really well. Kudos.

~Tori

Um, well, I can't stop smirking like a little fangirl. Loved the story. :3

That was a wake up call and a half :)

What's up with the gay part Lera?! I mean put Hikaru doing it anal to Haruhi not Kouru! I mean I'm not against gays but really don't do that with brothers much less twins!

I just want to say that this was awesome XD

I LOVED IT

that was hot and written good

Best Ouran high story yet!

Who would get aroused by watching the Twins doing the train wreck I would just run out the freaking room and even go at risks to call Tamaki

that was great, best lemon ever stright up!

omg. i love this... thank you sooo much for the yaoi plus haruhi! i wish there were more on here like this... and that's not even mentioning how well written it was. the way you described things kept me engaged from the beginning to the end. thanks.

Sexy sexy!

Interestingly, my fav line in this fic is often something I criticize in others... because perfectly timed orgasms are so cliche in the fabric world. But, with these super-close twins, well, this was just hot: "With a few more thrusts Kaoru and Hikaru simultaneously moaned loudly."

I also liked the realness of how quickly the boys got it on... is easily infers that they have been regular lovers for a long time. Totally SMEXY!

I don't know if you two are really twins, or whether that's just a tactic, but assuming you are, it makes me wonder how deeply you could delve into the twin thing. I suppose you are fraternal rather than identical... but it still must be difficult to be apart in college. Maybe you could warp your real-life feelings/experiences into a deeper (more plot oriented) Hikaru/Kaoru story. *eyebrow wiggle*

Thanks for writing! :-)

**A note on the if Kaoru needs lube or not. It seriously does feel better when lube is used. It may not be needed, but it feels good. KY has the whole warming sensations and stuff.

Anyway, great piece of smut fiction. I love the twins.

That was... amazing, fantastic, superb... *blushes and re-reads*

that was more like an koaru and haruhi , koaru and hikaru story but you put it as hikaru and haruhi